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jes a.k.a woot
Grabbing the Pencil
Posts: 44
Join date: 2010-01-24
Age: 16
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Name: Zessa
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Class: village retard :)
 |  Subject: some potry from today  Thu Jan 28, 2010 11:01 pm | |
| so first of please feel free to critic and input your ideas  they dont really have names eiher i can never come up with good ones  -i wish you were here, I want you to hole e,through the good, the bad when im up, when im down, but your far away and hearing your voice is a treat, your voice is what pulls me thought till i see you next _________________ " I owe everythign to those who were my stars when there was no sun my guidence, my friends" -me- |
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Dark_Spinning_Fairy
Following the Cruse of Muse
Posts: 187
Join date: 2009-10-24
Age: 15
Location: Wishing To Be In [His] Arms..., West Virginia
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HP:
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Class: Position in socity
| | Subject: Re: some potry from today Thu Jan 28, 2010 11:07 pm | |
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fleamailman
Treat yourself to some milkshakes, you've made it!
Posts: 871
Join date: 2010-01-23
| | Subject: Re: some potry from today Thu Jan 28, 2010 11:35 pm | |
| ("...it's coming along..." said the goblin) |
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| | Subject: Re: some potry from today Thu Jan 28, 2010 11:36 pm | |
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Dark_Spinning_Fairy
Following the Cruse of Muse
Posts: 187
Join date: 2009-10-24
Age: 15
Location: Wishing To Be In [His] Arms..., West Virginia
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Class: Position in socity
| | Subject: Re: some potry from today Thu Jan 28, 2010 11:39 pm | |
| I think its really uberly good  |
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jes a.k.a woot
Grabbing the Pencil
Posts: 44
Join date: 2010-01-24
Age: 16
Character Profile
Name: Zessa
HP:
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Class: village retard :)
| | Subject: Re: some potry from today Mon Feb 01, 2010 8:54 pm | |
| thanks guys and ya i agree it does need som work buuutttt it was a impromptuu kinda thing hah _________________ " I owe everythign to those who were my stars when there was no sun my guidence, my friends" -me- |
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Sage
Mentor of Creative Being
Posts: 143
Join date: 2010-01-21
Location: Overseer's Cloud
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Name: Sage
HP:
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Class: Overseer
| | Subject: Re: some potry from today Mon Feb 01, 2010 9:50 pm | |
| revise revise revies!!!!!!!
see, even i do it .....^^^
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Sage
Mentor of Creative Being
Posts: 143
Join date: 2010-01-21
Location: Overseer's Cloud
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Name: Sage
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Class: Overseer
| | Subject: Re: some potry from today Mon Feb 01, 2010 10:47 pm | |
| oh, also jess, don't forget to increase your diction.
now you will sound smartzzzzz@@@!!!!
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jes a.k.a woot
Grabbing the Pencil
Posts: 44
Join date: 2010-01-24
Age: 16
Character Profile
Name: Zessa
HP:
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Class: village retard :)
| | Subject: Re: some potry from today Tue Feb 02, 2010 1:31 am | |
| haha my vocabulary sucks xp
and revise? ok ill try XP
i wish you were with
I want you to hold me
every moment of our passing lives
when im up, when im down,
the rhythm of your voice gets me through the night
so i might dream without so much fear
getting to see you is all i dream about
so come back to Ohio, you hold my heart
better joe? its on the spot haha how would u write it? _________________ " I owe everythign to those who were my stars when there was no sun my guidence, my friends" -me- |
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Sage
Mentor of Creative Being
Posts: 143
Join date: 2010-01-21
Location: Overseer's Cloud
Character Profile
Name: Sage
HP:
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Class: Overseer
| | Subject: Re: some potry from today Tue Feb 02, 2010 1:42 am | |
| on the spot is fun and can help measure your poetic IQ O.O"
^_^
imma post bump everyone.
BUMP
it seems good jesse, just keep practicing.
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jes a.k.a woot
Grabbing the Pencil
Posts: 44
Join date: 2010-01-24
Age: 16
Character Profile
Name: Zessa
HP:
(150/150)
Class: village retard :)
| | Subject: Re: some potry from today Tue Feb 02, 2010 1:46 am | |
| hehe beep??? _________________ " I owe everythign to those who were my stars when there was no sun my guidence, my friends" -me- |
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Sage
Mentor of Creative Being
Posts: 143
Join date: 2010-01-21
Location: Overseer's Cloud
Character Profile
Name: Sage
HP:
(1/100)
Class: Overseer
| | Subject: Re: some potry from today Tue Feb 02, 2010 1:48 am | |
| BUMP!
but yesh...keep doing your stuffs
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jes a.k.a woot
Grabbing the Pencil
Posts: 44
Join date: 2010-01-24
Age: 16
Character Profile
Name: Zessa
HP:
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Class: village retard :)
| | Subject: Re: some potry from today Tue Feb 02, 2010 1:48 am | |
| haha okkaayyyy _________________ " I owe everythign to those who were my stars when there was no sun my guidence, my friends" -me- |
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fleamailman
Treat yourself to some milkshakes, you've made it!
Posts: 871
Join date: 2010-01-23
| | Subject: Re: some potry from today Tue Feb 02, 2010 10:06 am | |
| i wish you were with I want you to hold me every moment of our passing lives when im up, when im down, the rhythm of your voice gets me through the night so i might dream without so much fear getting to see you is all i dream about so come back to Ohio, you hold my heart -jes a.k.a woot-  |
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jes a.k.a woot
Grabbing the Pencil
Posts: 44
Join date: 2010-01-24
Age: 16
Character Profile
Name: Zessa
HP:
(150/150)
Class: village retard :)
| | Subject: Re: some potry from today Tue Feb 02, 2010 9:09 pm | |
| thanks for all the sweet pics fle mail man _________________ " I owe everythign to those who were my stars when there was no sun my guidence, my friends" -me- |
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