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PostSubject: Sage's despondent of the heart.   Thu Jan 28, 2010 12:22 am

Here, you may find my work...my area of expertise....as well as my lament.

Please...S-S-Step forward and grasp my hand. Tell me I need to improve as well as what I have done correct.

Every Sage still has to learn.

These poems and prompts, they describe me and my choices, my name, my identity,and my wildest ambitions.
My dream one day is to reach out and molest the hearts of the corrupt and bring an end to tyranny of inverse culture.
I want the world to embrace the artists, no longer fear us as cults...

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PostSubject: Re: Sage's despondent of the heart.   Thu Jan 28, 2010 12:38 am

My Writer's Soul

Underachieving led to hearts broken and faiths lashed,
The group sigh of a thousand doves
Bring home the peace and tranquilty as the earth bows before us,
The subtle license of the wed to defeated,
Conjuring these splendid ambitions in my heart
Now bestow the deteriorating of my inhibitions.

Enter this fatal cry,
The noel whose name is left silent--
The scream of this fatal cry--
The one we choose to repent,
Demonic homage and recital blood--
Unscrew this torture wrought upon our culture that sets us free--
Detain us ;this world does in sheer ingorance,
The arrogance is left untold
For it is us, who cannot measure true illtellection
But sigh heavy in the shadow of the wrong as we are wronged ourselves.

Sure though it may not lead to thee,
the homage of at housand doves crying to the sea's calms
But now we exist to the farther light sheerer than any remorse,
Let us be who we are and take the course of intell and conspiracy
For nothing ever came about, a statement soaring like doves over heads
Is that now, Greatness came from underachieving?

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PostSubject: Re: Sage's despondent of the heart.   Mon Feb 01, 2010 12:30 am

Bottled
Caught in a scenery that is everchanging
The lost is center stage
For all to see I cry and weep
Tearful sorrows abandon my being
Sinful distraught is for all to see.

My shackled feet look meak and broken,
Elongated stretches of accusing and pointing fingers-
Leave no hope for the ones left out.

This is agonizing in fullest extreme
To be that center stage and have them see,
The vulnerable part of me shows
While I hide behing my masks and hoping they disclose me.


This is not attention...

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PostSubject: Re: Sage's despondent of the heart.   Mon Feb 01, 2010 12:44 am

Well, I feel as though I can trust you guys...

so... ... ...
welcome to my home:


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PostSubject: Re: Sage's despondent of the heart.   Mon Feb 01, 2010 1:12 am

Wondrous and wonderful. and I am very honored to be welcomed to such an amazin home as thus.

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PostSubject: Re: Sage's despondent of the heart.   Mon Feb 01, 2010 1:25 am

All are welcome as long as they are mindful.

Ah too, the plants, they speak... they want friends to converse with.


<light shimmers down>

it is time....

<the plants, they whisper>

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PostSubject: Re: Sage's despondent of the heart.   Tue Feb 02, 2010 11:09 pm

01. chaotic equal thing
02. let's dance
03. daze
04. hallucination
05. pause in end
06. circles
07. chill
08. egotistic ideal
09. purification
10. a lull in the rain


listen to them... ... ...Acid Android

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PostSubject: Re: Sage's despondent of the heart.   Wed Feb 03, 2010 12:06 am

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My Writer's Soul
Underachieving led to hearts broken and faiths lashed,
The group sigh of a thousand doves
Bring home the peace and tranquilly as the earth bows before us,
The subtle license of the wed to defeated,
Conjuring these splendid ambitions in my heart
Now bestow the deteriorating of my inhibitions.

Enter this fatal cry,
The noel whose name is left silent--
The scream of this fatal cry--
The one we choose to repent,
Demonic homage and recital blood--
Unscrew this torture wrought upon our culture that sets us free--
Detain us ;this world does in sheer ignorance,
The arrogance is left untold
For it is us, who cannot measure true illtellection
But sigh heavy in the shadow of the wrong as we are wronged ourselves.

Sure though it may not lead to thee,
the homage of at housand doves crying to the sea's calms
But now we exist to the farther light sheerer than any remorse,
Let us be who we are and take the course of intell and conspiracy
For nothing ever came about, a statement soaring like doves over heads
Is that now, Greatness came from underachieving?

-sage-

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PostSubject: Re: Sage's despondent of the heart.   Thu Feb 04, 2010 12:33 am

Thank you for the excquisite interpretation!!!!!

Lovely thou are indeed, divine in enlightment and appeased in soul of affable hands!
I love how you tried to portray my piece, simply magnificent, thanks.

^_^

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PostSubject: Re: Sage's despondent of the heart.   Thu Feb 04, 2010 1:20 am

("...all I am doing is what you will be doing..." said the goblin who somehow felt sage had a good eye here, adding "...I think you will amaze me next...")
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PostSubject: Re: Sage's despondent of the heart.   Fri Feb 05, 2010 12:40 am

I find you an auspicious friend... I will see to it that we meet again.

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PostSubject: Re: Sage's despondent of the heart.   Fri Feb 05, 2010 2:25 am

"...and I will await upon your thoughts then..." replied the goblin

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